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  • hey guys check it a story for ya

    http://usa.internations.net/assassin/sandy.txt

    click here for it, its long but well worth it,
    An open mind is like a fortress, with its gates unbarred and and guarded

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    post positive comments here
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    An open mind is like a fortress, with its gates unbarred and and guarded

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    • #3
      I kinda read through the first 3 lines, and closed the window. If someone is going to ignore simple grammatical rules, why bother capitalizing? You have a lot to learn my friend...

      It's best to break most of them.

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      • #4
        OMG you F***IN noob, your gonna ignore a good story because you don't like the grammer. DUDE STFU!!

        oh yeah, its not even mine its someone that i know's and its GOOD
        An open mind is like a fortress, with its gates unbarred and and guarded

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        • #5
          I'm sorry, I can't read it either.

          There are grammatical rules for a reason. So the readers knows whats going on and ease of reading.

          I suppose if I wanted to WORK at it, i could read it. But I don't want to have to work at reading.

          EDIT: Maybe someone should edit it...?
          Garlisk's Fantasy Art Gallery
          www.usyetzer.com

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          • #6
            "Positive comments" ?! Where's the point in that? You might as well not have bothered with the story and just said,

            "Hey people, send me emails telling me I'm cool!"
            I'm cool!

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            • #7
              Originally posted by assassin
              OMG you F***IN noob, your gonna ignore a good story because you don't like the grammer. DUDE STFU!!

              oh yeah, its not even mine its someone that i know's and its GOOD
              Am I the only person who doesn't consider myself a noob at proper grammatization??

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              • #8
                I cant not find anything worng.
                Never let LaughingRat shave your testicles with a rusty serrated knife.

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                • #9
                  Grammatization?

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                  • #10
                    I try to be good when I write, even though I'm not an expert. I at least try to make it entertaining.

                    Speaking of which, the next part of my Dak Garlisk story might be up soon (within the month...maybe?).

                    Expect it to be action packed...and the return of the swordthief, as V12US requested!! (Is he still around?)
                    Garlisk's Fantasy Art Gallery
                    www.usyetzer.com

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                    • #11
                      Originally posted by LaughingRat
                      Spelling != grammar.

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                      • #12
                        If you're going to preach about one, you look something of a fool entirely buggering the other, Swiss
                        Nightmaster,
                        .:Mockers Thievery Guild:.
                        - "until the cat is skinned"

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                        • #13
                          pFF.whenwill you.learn?

                          grammar doe'snt matter,

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                          • #14
                            grammar DOES matter, Important thing!!
                            Good bye!
                            Aurevoir!

                            leaving

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                            • #15
                              Ivr recenty found while grammar and spelling are important, Getting your point across Is more importane than either.
                              Never let LaughingRat shave your testicles with a rusty serrated knife.

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