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  • koraX's TCC - Issue I : The Scepter (Updated)

    warning for 56k-ers : 800kB of pics
    warning for 800x600 users : you will have an evil scrollbar. 1024x768 users has less evil scrollbar

    What's new :
    - 5 new pages added
    - nearly all old page has been updated (minor changes in images, text, but plot is the same)
    - there will probably be 1 update and then there will be a final release















    the story will continue soon ...

    P.S. : High-res version also avaiable, I'll make a zip when the Issue will be complete
    P.S.S : I am not a native english speaker, so my english is not perfect, but I hope that you will understand most of the text. I already noticed some mistakes in this release. I'll correct it when I'll do the next part

  • #2
    Lookin' good!

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    • #3
      Make it so that the thief gets raped good, please.
      JM

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      • #4
        nicely done, i think the gaurd should beat the thief to the septor and take it himself, twould be a nice plot twist
        "When it is difficult to put someone to the sword with one hand, by all means kill him with two hands"
        Miyamoto Musashi

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        • #5
          Nice!

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          • #6
            Good job, Korax.
            Deftones

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            • #7
              Good job, made me laugh :lol:

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              • #8
                Yeah!

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                • #9
                  Classy!

                  One question- Why did the boss say he caught Pedro sleeping? He was taffing around the kitchen when the boss came in.
                  Give some taffer fire, and you'll keep him warm for the night with one less reason to cause trouble for the master.
                  Set a taffer on fire, and he will be warm for the rest of his life, and have no need to bother the master.

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                  • #10
                    Very nice job!

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                    • #11
                      Awesome!

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                      • #12
                        Originally posted by Thebos
                        Why did the boss say he caught Pedro sleeping? He was taffing around the kitchen when the boss came in.
                        I will correct that, among other small mistakes.

                        Thanx for responses.

                        We have 3 possible endings. Pedro kills thief, Thief steals scepter and run away, or Mad Gerbil comes and firespam thief Which ending should I use ?

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                        • #13
                          what about, Mad Gerbil comes and gets killed by the Thief, then Pedro gets the Thief 8)
                          Nightwarden,
                          .:Mockers Thievery Guild:.
                          - "Earth dons the red; calls the maggots."

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                          • #14
                            Someone ALWAYS dies by the crates in bourgeios....

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                            • #15
                              Nice korax!

                              How about this ending:

                              Thief steals sceptre after KOing all guards except Pedro, Pedro returns, looks at this mess, gets crazy, goes back to the pub and kills everyone, just before the thief KOs him to stop the bloodshed!
                              I Need Training!

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