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  • So I just wrote a new song.

    Here it is, it's called:

    Conversations With A Phantom

    the words:

    Standing on the edge of the universe,
    The Phantom calls "Do you know what time it is?
    Its the end of all life as you know it; its the end of the
    Grotesque imperfection of the fate you bought and paid for.

    "In a world without time, and a world without break;
    In a bond without trust, its a wonder you continue at all.
    If I were you, I'd have ended it, I'd have walked out that door.
    But I guess I'm just not as strong as you.

    "The cancer's spreading like a cat's claw on the moonlight face.
    It's a race we're winning, and I don't think I've seen as much.
    But there's never a moment to lose when the gun cries out
    And the finish line of a heartbeat weeps and beckons to you."

    I am awake with all my senses keen and sharp.
    This mirror image in my head is just the least of troubles.
    When I can shatter all illusions, that is when I'll be undone.
    so for now please forgive me my ignorance of you.
    It's all I hope for, to be knowing of the Dark.

    "A stranger to me, you're a No One that I've seen everyday.
    Its not that different to meet an old friend in a different face.
    If you could open your eyes once, you'd see what I mean;
    It's not a Phantom, just a No One and a Book that you've signed:

    "'You've patterned everyday
    To end the day under your covers,
    But I know better than you;
    Its an illusion.'

    "You're a ghost in the clouds; you're a taste of imagination; you are
    A spirit of passed times; an angry child grown into a man.
    There's nothing to do here but rattle cages that you've locked with your pride,
    And say 'goodbye' to all the ones you loved but couldn't say why.

    "I'm not gonna say 'goodbye' and I'm not gonna end this night short.
    I can't believe that the shelter of a heart ends in tears and you won't escape such.
    But pattern anger after love and you can find you're growing closer to the things
    You used to talk about on cloudless nights; before your mind grew dull,
    For there was nothing left to say before your body grew so, so cold."
    Now I'll crawl back into the shadows, where I can smite you all from afar.
    I'm not so bad... Once you get to know me.

  • #2
    Not my style. What genre would you call that anyways?
    The only constant is change.
    (And I wouldn't have it any other way.)


    • #3
      lol at first I've read : Conversation With A PhaeThorn


      • #4
        And I will never ever ever ever ever ever make a song about Thwark-y.

        Hey! Where's that beat coming from?!


        • #5
          I could get used to that....

          The lyrics are good, at any rate.
          "Just off the border of your waking mind there lies another time, where darkness and light are one. As you tread the halls of sanity, you feel so glad to be unable to go beyond. I have a message from another time."


          • #6
            Not really my kinda music, either, but I liked it.
            Nearly all men can stand adversity -- if you want to test a man’s character, give him power.


            • #7
              i like it..the lyrics could be more clear or louder but either way it's good
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              • #8
                Thwark is teh r0x0r. That's one hell of a special music style, still cool.

                Nice to see you've done some stuff again. Thought you were kinda busy these days.


                • #9
                  Originally posted by CrouchingDork
                  What genre would you call that anyways?
                  my friend Ken calls it "Pink Floyd HipHop" - i'm inclined to agree
                  I'm not so bad... Once you get to know me.


                  • #10
                    strange but not bad... ok kinda creepy, i was playing this in the background while playing thievery..... weird
                    An open mind is like a fortress, with its gates unbarred and and guarded


                    • #11
                      it scares me, i like it!
                      This is my cool sig.


                      • #12
                        Works on many levels. Well done, song writing is a great talent, and you certanly have it.
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                        • #13
                          The song has a creepy feeling. And I love the lyrics.


                          • #14
                            I really liked thy lyrics.
                            In the Future, One Duck Is The Law.


                            • #15
                              I'd DL it but I'm afraid the government will track me down and fine me 2k loot for trading aka "stealing" it. :roll:
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